00:00
00:00
MissingTheMoon

4 Movie Reviews

1 w/ Responses

BOY!

Amazing! Telling the story without any text or speech actually fit really well with no sound vfx ^^
The only thing I can criticise is the abscence of screenshake in the fight scene. Holy that already looked epic! The perspective and flow gosh 10/10 on the fight scene. Screenshake for his final attack and uff thatsa masta piece

antdung responds:

I wanted camera shake during the fight but didn't have time! I just uploaded a version that does though! :) Thanks for watching, man!

Him not giving a damm about the police was ... amazing XD
The light should come when he looks at her, blinding him a little. And when she dies it should start to go dark. That would look better I think, but Im not sure whether it would still be funny like that.
Well done cheers

Amazing animations you did there! The sound was in harmony with it. The screenshake felt good. I really enjoyed watching this!

Improvements:
1) At the end the cyborg girl got hit, and you had blood effects for that o.O (Not sure how a cyborg looks when hit, but blood wasnt making sense to me)
2) I felt that the fight was epic overall. A lot of action, cool abilities and god dammit those fluid animations. Good shit!

But the fight didnt have any kind of contrast in itself. Everything these two girls slammed against each other looked crazy and strong. But therefore there was no build up. No "getting stronger and more serious" over the course of the fight. Maybe a 2 seconds hand to hand combat at the start, after which they stop and just stare at each other. Then do something bigger and bigger. The contrast between the start and the finish would make it seem more epic. Instead of everything feeling over the top because everything they do seems op and huge and strong.

Well done :) Cheers

Striving to become the best game designer there is!
Thank you for playing my games, feedback is highly appreciated!

Moon Moon @MissingTheMoon

Age 29, Male

Student

Germany, Frankfurt

Joined on 12/15/17

Level:
2
Exp Points:
29 / 50
Exp Rank:
> 100,000
Vote Power:
2.24 votes
Rank:
Civilian
Global Rank:
> 100,000
Blams:
0
Saves:
3
B/P Bonus:
0%
Whistle:
Normal
Medals:
5
Supporter:
1m 1d